The Importance of Revision

You might not be able to tell, but I spend quite a bit of time on these posts. Not just writing them, but revising them. Revise, revise, revise until I’m happy with all the important nuances I perceive and am trying to get across. So today, I will provide you with an example that demonstrates why revision is so important.

Last night, Heather and I went to part of the Red Sox game.

They lost won.

This is a critical junction in the season with the AL East as tight as it is. Every win or loss is crucial. With the loss win there is a good chance the Sox will be out of make the playoffs.

The game was pretty boring exciting. This was the best a good play of the night:

The crowd had fun went crazy during the 8th 9th:

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Because the game was so boring exciting, I got one several texts from my brother Matt, Phil, and Dave:

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Even though we left and the game ended in a loss walk off, we had fun.

Note – Ask Heather if it is okay to post above photo.